CHARITY COMMISSION SALE - Fyo by winterscent

Hi hi hi! I'm here with to give you the best comment I can possibly manage! I hope that this will help you out. 

So, since the lineart was done by someone else, I'll avoid that for my comments, and focus as much as I can on your coloring work! That way I can give the most accurate and useful critique possible. Not that I had anything particular to say about the lineart in the first place though-- it's simple but effective. Anyway, onto the actual substance of the critique! 

First of all, the good: the color scheme is really relaxing and pretty. I love this sort of soft, nighttime sky palette of yours. It just feels very nice and comforting and fits rather well with the image. The lighting as well is very nice and clean, with no particular faults. It's clear from the shadows and highlights where the light source is coming from, and you put a lot of effort into drawing and lighting the little details. I can even see the textures on the individual... bells? Ornaments? Whatever they are, I'm impressed with your attention to detail within them. You clearly put a lot of thought into coloring this, and for that I congratulate you! Do keep up the good work! 

For the not so good, I feel like there's more that you could have done with the face to make it fit in with the rest of the drawing. Overall, compared to the rest, it feels rather flat, and that makes it stand out, yes, but not in the way I would think you'd want. Just a little bit of light on the nose, eye crease, and lip would do you some real wonders in making the face stand out in the right ways. A little bit of shading detail on the fingers too might make them a little less like wedges and a little more like fingers. After all, fingers have creases and bends from where your knuckles are! Just a little something to indicate that would make a world of difference. 

Overall, I think this is a very good piece. Keep working hard and keep up the good work!